sitting in every possible Hallway,
Thinking how would it really feel like
When the world looks at you with dislike,
All you can do is to scowl,
When people around you are on a prowl,
Din't know where i was heading,
Life seemed absolutely beheading
Just when i realized,
There was a glitch with
the things that i had idealized,
Why always me i thought
god whispered "wait till i give you a reshot",
This was not the first time
that i was in a crummy slime,
Convincing myself wholly
I was Falling Slowly!!
14 comments:
Your first poem.
Hmmm.. I am at loss of words. This is brilliant. Seriously. Unbelievable stuff. First poem = so good, wonder how ur future poems will be. This u wrote chumma for time pass. If u get emotional and write--> well, am just waiting to read more :)
all the best.
hey cant believe tat its ur 1st poem...ur jus toooooo gud at it yaar...will be waitin for ur next poem...ur an amazin writer n now u've tried ur hands on poems n man...u've jus done it brilliantly!!!!!
keep up the gud work dude!!!!
long way to go...
awesome dumm !!!! u write reely rely well ...change "can i really write " man.... high tme dum !!!
sri raghu on the rocks :)
1st poem anthaa helakkey agolla sri sri raghu ;)
superrrrrrrrrrr :)
rock on
unbelievable mote... brilliant piece of work... if your first poem is so influencing and incredibly well written, wonder how will be your future ones... actually i am searching for words to praise your work... keep it up boy!!! waiting for your next work... :)
a poem!! the last thing I expected to see here! good one raghav :D
i love the last two lines - "Convincing myself wholly
I was Falling Slowly!!"
Thannk u guys!!!
first poem really?????? its jus brilliant man....!!!!!!
hey rags, i exist but not really blogging. thanks for checkin in, i shld b back.. but as of now in a perpetual state of 'falling slowly'.. thanks to MS!!
n for a first poem, gr8 work! i see u r bloggin very often n very well ! keep it goin.. :) ya i do read all ur blogs.. :)
the best poem any starter can write... simply superb n apt use of words rags... jus perfect... go on n on :) wil be waitin for nxt 1...
@chai n Chan
Thanks guys! :)
@Aastha
come on!! write!!! u won't be that busy also!! atleast one post a month???
oh man i thought i left a comment for this....ggggrrrrr...anyways the poem was super...i would not tell that it was by a beginner...off to a flyin start i say...keep up the rate dude :-)
your first poem? ?? :O
wow! too good..
blogrolled you :) i will keep coming.. :)
not much into movies so reviews aren't for me.. but this blog has a lot for me...
see you around..
:)
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